Comments for Mrs. Stefano's Blog http://rm23.edublogs.org Tue, 02 Dec 2008 14:27:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by LindseyER http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-31 LindseyER Thu, 15 Mar 2007 17:29:04 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-31 Big moose he keep sliping and falling. The twins yealed MOOSE!!!! the parents got up ran to the windo. It was a moose a big ugly moose. the moose was gone he had to go star in a move. To be contiued. Big moose he keep sliping and falling. The twins yealed MOOSE!!!! the parents got up ran to the windo. It was a moose a big ugly moose. the moose was gone he had to go star in a move. To be contiued.

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by camgabby13 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-30 camgabby13 Thu, 08 Mar 2007 22:42:04 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-30 Elf that was running away from a dinosour. It was wrapping presents for the world. I saw a present with my name on it was a................... Elf that was running away from a dinosour. It was wrapping presents for the world. I saw a present with my name on it was a……………….

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by Zinx567 says http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-28 Zinx567 says Thu, 08 Mar 2007 01:14:59 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-28 Zacks continued...Huuu not my D.S,Ipod.dell,labtop and blankey!!!!!!They had took them and they were eating them then a giant singing "It Ends Tonight" jumped on the house Rob and Bob ran out as fast they could and beat the giants but they did not save the D.S,Ipod,Dell,labtop and blankey. The next day their were alot of people outside they were loooking for the giants they happen to carry billons of dollars in cash!!!!So they went were they had beat the Giants and it was rain dollars and cats and dogs then a bigger thumping then the giants came it was a........ Zacks continued…Huuu not my D.S,Ipod.dell,labtop and blankey!!!!!!They had took them and they were eating them then a giant singing “It Ends Tonight” jumped on the house Rob and Bob ran out as fast they could and beat the giants but they did not save the D.S,Ipod,Dell,labtop and blankey. The next day their were alot of people outside they were loooking for the giants they happen to carry billons of dollars in cash!!!!So they went were they had beat the Giants and it was rain dollars and cats and dogs then a bigger thumping then the giants came it was a……..

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by Shannon http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-27 Shannon Tue, 06 Mar 2007 23:01:46 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-27 igloo. It was as big as mount Everest. It was as hard as a rock. It was your worst nightmare. TO BE CONTINUED. igloo. It was as big as mount Everest. It was as hard as a rock. It was your worst nightmare. TO BE CONTINUED.

]]> Comment on Here is our first question!!!!! by Kylie http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/21/here-is-our-first-question/#comment-26 Kylie Sun, 04 Mar 2007 13:51:14 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/21/here-is-our-first-question/#comment-26 Yes because I she helps explain the idea of writing the stories were writing. Even my mom thinks she is a great teacher in writing. Yes because I she helps explain the idea of writing the stories were writing. Even my mom thinks she is a great teacher in writing.

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by Kylie http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-25 Kylie Sun, 04 Mar 2007 13:48:09 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-25 was a giant reindeer. They screamed and ran outside in their polka dot pajamas and and jumped on the reindeerand it started to fly. They told their parents it was th best time of their life. was a giant reindeer. They screamed and ran outside in their polka dot pajamas and and jumped on the reindeerand it started to fly. They told their parents it was th best time of their life.

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by Mia R.ER http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-24 Mia R.ER Fri, 02 Mar 2007 02:25:39 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-24 dog. It was sleding down the hill with some bling-bling on, and on the sled the dog had a karaoke machine. Well it crashed head first into the snow, then it got up and started to sing SOS (Someones gonna resue me) and he was dancing like crazy. Then he told the kids to come here (he was a talking dog) and dance like this, because he had some sweet moves. So the kids went up and danced like the dog. It was the craziest day ever!!!!!!! dog. It was sleding down the hill with some bling-bling on, and on the sled the dog had a karaoke machine. Well it crashed head first into the snow, then it got up and started to sing SOS (Someones gonna resue me) and he was dancing like crazy. Then he told the kids to come here (he was a talking dog) and dance like this, because he had some sweet moves. So the kids went up and danced like the dog. It was the craziest day ever!!!!!!!

]]> Comment on Here is our first question!!!!! by Mia R.ER http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/21/here-is-our-first-question/#comment-23 Mia R.ER Fri, 02 Mar 2007 02:16:10 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/21/here-is-our-first-question/#comment-23 yes, because if we didn't have it this way it might be not as fun yes, because if we didn’t have it this way it might be not as fun

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by MiaMushu/ Mia http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-22 MiaMushu/ Mia Fri, 02 Mar 2007 01:40:33 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-22 dog. THe dog was going down the hill with a kareokie machine on the sled, then he fell head first. He got up and started to dance like crazy and he was singing S.O.S. Someones Gonna Rescue Me da da da daaaaaaa, he was singing like he was on American Idol!! Finally he said come on down guys, let's dance like this,(the dog showed the kids the dance) now all of the kids were dancing. It was a crazy night that night. dog. THe dog was going down the hill with a kareokie machine on the sled, then he fell head first. He got up and started to dance like crazy and he was singing S.O.S. Someones Gonna Rescue Me da da da daaaaaaa, he was singing like he was on American Idol!! Finally he said come on down guys, let’s dance like this,(the dog showed the kids the dance) now all of the kids were dancing. It was a crazy night that night.

]]> Comment on Here is the beginning of a story. You need to add 3 more sentences to it. Be creative and have fun!!! by Cobra the great http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-21 Cobra the great Fri, 02 Mar 2007 00:07:28 +0000 http://rm23.edublogs.org/2007/02/27/here-is-the-beginning-of-a-story-you-need-to-add-3-more-sentences-to-it-be-creative-and-have-fun/#comment-21 holly Mamith. After the parents awoke the whole family went outside to there sleeding hill. Suddenly all of us screamed and tried to run but the holly Mamith caght them and dragged them to his cave. Well the holly Mamith got the fire ready the family tried to escape the holly mamith got some wood and saw the family trying to escape and RAOREDDDDDDDDDDDD. The monster was fearest he went up to them and roared again the family panicked then the monster grow tired of watching the family trying to run away. So the monster just fell asleep the end. From Sade King holly Mamith. After the parents awoke the whole family went outside to there sleeding hill. Suddenly all of us screamed and tried to run but the holly Mamith caght them and dragged them to his cave. Well the holly Mamith got the fire ready the family tried to escape the holly mamith got some wood and saw the family trying to escape and RAOREDDDDDDDDDDDD. The monster was fearest he went up to them and roared again the family panicked then the monster grow tired of watching the family trying to run away. So the monster just fell asleep the end.
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