Here is our first question!!!!!
Do you think working with Ms. Burke and using the color coding is helping you to become a better writer? Don’t forget to explain why or why not.
Do you think working with Ms. Burke and using the color coding is helping you to become a better writer? Don’t forget to explain why or why not.
February 21st, 2007 at 6:47 pm
Yes because i think she explains it better and lets us do more stuff.On other thoughts the blog is fun!!!!
February 21st, 2007 at 7:26 pm
Yes because it’s helpful!
From,
HipHop Kristi
February 22nd, 2007 at 4:29 pm
yes i think it does because she explains things better!!! And on the other hand the blog is fun!!!
From,
Michael or zoomrunner
February 22nd, 2007 at 6:57 pm
Yes, i think it does because she explains everything step by step and it makes it a lot easier.
From,
JJ
February 22nd, 2007 at 8:17 pm
yes because Ms.Burke makes it fun and dramatic. We learn a lot from it.
From,
Lindxyz
February 22nd, 2007 at 9:07 pm
Yes because I got to see what a great thing it was and to use the colors and stuff.By the way I love the Blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. From
Sade
February 26th, 2007 at 8:17 am
I agree with all of you. I am having fun reading your comments on the blog page and Ms. Burke is one of the best teachers of writing that I know.
February 28th, 2007 at 1:25 pm
Hello writers,
I am glad the color coding works for you. Remember, when you organize the sentences for the perfect paragraph with a fantastic, hook-me-in topic sentence, think:
green -topic sentence,
yellow-main idea, red-details that support the main idea, yellow, reds,
yellow, reds,
blue.
We’ll finish up next week and let me know what confuses you about the process. Your topic sentences are fantastic!!
Slan go foill, (Irish language)
Ms. Burke
February 28th, 2007 at 4:19 pm
i think it is easier because she explains it boldly
March 1st, 2007 at 9:16 pm
yes, because if we didn’t have it this way it might be not as fun
March 4th, 2007 at 8:51 am
Yes because I she helps explain the idea of writing the stories were writing. Even my mom thinks she is a great teacher in writing.